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Post by Vulpesen Torrevaso on Jun 12, 2014 16:23:28 GMT -6
Vulpesen sat quietly in the training room, polishing his sword as he waited for people to enter the room. Around him, there was silence. It was annoying thing the silence, but given time he was sure that the hall would fill with the constant ringing of swords. But for now, he simply waited. Sarah had been an old friend of his and he looked forward to teaching her the ways of combat. As she had wished to be a wolf, it only made sense for her to learn how to outfight those she may come across.
(OOC: My parenthesis will hold OOC tips and info, that way we can increase your writing form as well as your IC attack forms)s
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Post by Sarah(DragonQueen) on Jun 12, 2014 16:29:17 GMT -6
*she gives a simple wave to V and sits*
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Post by Vulpesen Torrevaso on Jun 12, 2014 16:42:57 GMT -6
Vulpesen nodded to Sarah and stood up, pulling a wooden blade from a rack and tossing it to her. "Sarah, have you ever used a blade before?"
(Tip one, its often best to use Quotes for words and nothing around actions. Also, try to capitalize and punctuate.)
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Post by Sarah(DragonQueen) on Jun 12, 2014 16:44:22 GMT -6
Sarah Nods"Yes your talking to someone who likes swords and being a worrier"
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Post by Vulpesen Torrevaso on Jun 12, 2014 16:49:54 GMT -6
Vulpesen placed Tenebris Anime on a nearby rack and drew another practice blade, saluting Sarah. "Good, then lets see what you know."
(As I said, avoid using stars (*) and use only words and quotes to describe your actions and words. Its hard to break the habit I know, but it gets easy after a while.)
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Post by Sarah(DragonQueen) on Jun 12, 2014 16:51:43 GMT -6
Sarah dont like being bossed around* >.<
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Post by Vulpesen Torrevaso on Jun 12, 2014 16:53:33 GMT -6
(Think of it less as orders and more of suggestions to keep you alive against bigger people.)
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Post by Sarah(DragonQueen) on Jun 13, 2014 5:33:02 GMT -6
(Yeah yeah..but this is going to be hard since its a habit...)
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Post by Vulpesen Torrevaso on Jun 13, 2014 13:52:34 GMT -6
(As I said, hard at first but you get used to it.)
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Post by Sarah(DragonQueen) on Jun 13, 2014 14:05:17 GMT -6
(I guess...)
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Post by Vulpesen Torrevaso on Jun 13, 2014 15:10:56 GMT -6
(Try editing one of your posts as a start.)
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Post by Sarah(DragonQueen) on Jun 13, 2014 15:27:18 GMT -6
Sarah gets the sword ready "Why cant I have a real sword?"
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Post by Vulpesen Torrevaso on Jun 13, 2014 15:49:24 GMT -6
Vulpesen shrugged and lifted his own blade. "Because I don't want to shed real blood." With that, he started to walk a slow circle around her.
(Very good. Just remember to use punctuation. (.,!?) )
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Post by Sarah(DragonQueen) on Jun 13, 2014 17:23:21 GMT -6
(Like I would forget) She stays where she is watching him. "I guess so but wheres the fun?"
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Post by Vulpesen Torrevaso on Jun 13, 2014 18:05:45 GMT -6
Vulpesen laughed and continued his circle. "The fun lies in that I don't bisect you with actions such as THIS!" At his last word, Vulpesen lunged forward, his wrist flicking the wooden blade towards his dueling partner's side.
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