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Post by Sarah(DragonQueen) on Jun 27, 2014 16:08:12 GMT -6
Sarah gets her sword ready trying to figure out where to hit or attack knowing she needs to make a move before he does so starts to run at him and jumps up going to attack from above, hitting his head
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Post by Vulpesen Torrevaso on Jun 28, 2014 11:50:56 GMT -6
Vulpesen's eyes followed her movements, preparing his body for the coming attack. As Sarah leaped forward, the master quickly brought his sword to bear with a quick arc, placing it parallel to the ground and just above his head to catch the blow. "Close." He would spin to place a hard kick to her midsection. "Not close enough."
(Very good. One thing. Try not to make hits definite. It gets on the nerves of a lot of writiers. Best to instead type something such as, "Hopefully hitting his head." That one word makes a lot of difference.
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Post by Sarah(DragonQueen) on Jul 1, 2014 12:47:48 GMT -6
Sarah huffs hitting the ground and sighs as she waves the white flag again feeling like she wanted to give up very quick since she was a slow learner and can't seem to get things right*
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